Kyle|浸入文学世界的燎原学生，格外有魅力( 二 )
Jotham’s PPT is very aesthetically pleasing. Jotham has made some strong points about memory and the supporting evidence from the text is appropriate and serves to strengthen his argument. I cannot talk enough about what a good job he did on your PPT. It uses pictures and slide transitions that elevate the material and tie in nicely with the ideas/themes of 'The Giver'. The writing is very competent and smooth. In all cases, Jotham has shown care and detail when writing. Fantastic.
Ryan同学通过结合小说与影片 ， 举例讨论“记忆”这个主题 。
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Kyle老师点评：
Ryan 的课业完成地很好 。 他完全按照老师的要求来做 ， 很好地地展现了《记忆传授者》中关乎记忆的这个主题 。 他还讨论了为什么记忆很重要 ， 并很好地给出了例子来诠释 。
Very great work Ryan! Ryan has followed the instructions very well in completing a project that properly explores the theme of 'memory' in 'The Giver'. He has made his argument on why memory is important and then used the PPT to show how the text supports this idea.
Jennie同学以《The Giver》角色写日记 。
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Kyle老师点评：
Jennie 的课业看得出她很努力 。 她用了很多细节和论据来为《记忆传授者》里的角色写日记 。
Very strong effort Jennie. Jennie has used many details/supporting evidence to create interesting diary entries for the character of 'the Giver'.
Ivan同学论述记忆对于人类的重要性 。
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Kyle老师点评：
Ivan的写作很好 。 尽管有一些小的语法问题 ， 不过仍让老师读懂了 。 他的观点和思考非常清晰 ， 并用了文本里的论据来支持他的观点 。 PPT有些平淡 ， 可以用一些图片来做一些视觉改善 。
Very nicely written work Ivan. While some of the writing contains minor grammatical issues, it is understandable and does not detract from the point in any major way. Ivan’s arguments and thoughts are very clear and he uses very suitable supporting evidence from the text to provide strength to his points. The only issue is that the PPT is quite plain. He might consider adding pictures/gifs/text from the book, to make the PPT more visually interesting.
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